Hi Mr. T;
Thanks for your input, below are my responces plus it is almost 6 in the morning here in the USA, so I'm feeling kind of tired:
<< have ten remarks:
- SSR4: If Moroccans are considered Gurkhas, they are immune to cowering, since Gurkhas are British elite troops. As it might not be your intention, you might want to rephrase.>>
I noted in the SSR that the Moroccans are still subject to cowering.
<<- SSR3: this could be clarified. Something like ?Due to fatigue, SS MMCs suffer Unit Replacement normally (A19.132)? could work.>>
I was under the impression that Unit Replacement means to replace with a lower quality unit. With an underlined moral, if the unit in question fails his Moral check as well as exceeding ELR, that unit is replaced by two half squads. So I see no reason to revise SSR 3.
<<- Historical introduction: line 2 individual, not individule
- Historical introduction: line 8: France?s, not France>>
Fixed.
<<- SSR1: EC, not EC?s
- SSR4: ?is in effect?, not ?in in effect?>>
Fixed
<<- PB Board orientation: to show direction, the arrow should point at a different hex than the hex it is located>>
Hmmm, I really can not under stand what you are saying here, the Arrow on the scenario card looks pretty clear to me, then again, I'v been up for 24 hours so my mind might be a little tired.
<<- Aftermath, line 8: L?Arbresle, not L?Arbreslen
- Aftermath line 8: its, not it?s>>
Corrected.
<<- Finally, one historical remark. According to Sydnor?s ?Soldiers of Destruction?, the action that day involved only 30 Moroccans (?the SS men (?) killed every one of the thirty Moroccans soldiers involved in the skirmish?) ?see pages 116-117). The Unit involved in the action was the ?Fifth company of the Second Battalion/SSTK/I.R.2?. Maybe you have more detailed info on the action.>>
I have the same book plus To Lose a Battle, both are very good sources on composing this scenario.
Good night all
Scott